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StarWatcher ([personal profile] starwatcher) wrote in [community profile] the_old_guard2021-08-22 11:17 pm
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Major additions to my transcript + Charlie safehouse floorplan

 

Just what the title says. I've added approximately 4,700 more words of action-description, and about 1,300 more words of Copley’s-board descriptions. I also changed the formatting to put (most) descriptions on separate lines from dialogue. Changed some dialogue from what was in the provided transcript to what the characters actually said, and a couple of places where I originally attributed a line to the wrong character. Fixed some continuity mistakes, weaving the action-description within the dialogue.

Here at AO3

Or at Dreamwidth -- 11 versions of different color, bold, italics, or plain formatting.

I also made a floorplan of the Charlie safehouse, posted at AO3.

 
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[personal profile] minoanmiss 2021-08-23 02:19 pm (UTC)(link)
oh my wow! thank you!
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[personal profile] kaberett 2021-08-23 08:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh goodness, what an amazing resource! Bookmarking -- thank you :)
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[personal profile] goodbyebird 2021-12-09 08:52 am (UTC)(link)
Very late, but sliding in to say this is amazing.