Major additions to my transcript + Charlie safehouse floorplan

[starwatcher]

 

Just what the title says. I've added approximately 4,700 more words of action-description, and about 1,300 more words of Copley’s-board descriptions. I also changed the formatting to put (most) descriptions on separate lines from dialogue. Changed some dialogue from what was in the provided transcript to what the characters actually said, and a couple of places where I originally attributed a line to the wrong character. Fixed some continuity mistakes, weaving the action-description within the dialogue.

Here at AO3

Or at Dreamwidth -- 11 versions of different color, bold, italics, or plain formatting.

I also made a floorplan of the Charlie safehouse, posted at AO3.

 

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[starwatcher]

 
<g> You're very welcome. I just hope my muse will call it 'good' and quit driving me for awhile. But no... she's already telling me the floorplan is 'smudgy' and needs to be cleaned up. But it'll be on the same page when I do; it won't just disappear.