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*ANOTHER* transcript revision
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starwatcher.
No major changes; the dialogue and actions didn't get rewritten when we wern't looking. But this time I tried to really focus on the "edges" -- who was doing what while the characters center-stage were doing their thing -- and added that information. (Can't believe how much I missed the first few times!) I also [b] added some descriptions, and more complete descriptions of some actions, [c] made some corrections to the sequencing of speech / description in dialogue, [d] included Andy's Russian phrase to the pilot, and [e] made some general grammar / word-choice edits. (I'm very picky about such things.) About 2,700 more words.
I... don't think I'm finished. (Copley's boards, check the fight scenes again.) But I don't want to spam this comm, and enough is enough. From now on, I'll note the date of the most recent updates at the top of my transcript master post and in the notes to the AO3 version; if you have need of a "latest version", check back there occasionally to see if there's anything new.
Anyway, same as the last time -- all the versions of my transcript are where I left them, but have been updated. If you access the transcript online, nothing changes. But if you download and save a copy on your own computer, or copy it to a word-processing program to manipulate to your satisfaction, you may want to go grab the latest version.
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No major changes; the dialogue and actions didn't get rewritten when we wern't looking. But this time I tried to really focus on the "edges" -- who was doing what while the characters center-stage were doing their thing -- and added that information. (Can't believe how much I missed the first few times!) I also [b] added some descriptions, and more complete descriptions of some actions, [c] made some corrections to the sequencing of speech / description in dialogue, [d] included Andy's Russian phrase to the pilot, and [e] made some general grammar / word-choice edits. (I'm very picky about such things.) About 2,700 more words.
I... don't think I'm finished. (Copley's boards, check the fight scenes again.) But I don't want to spam this comm, and enough is enough. From now on, I'll note the date of the most recent updates at the top of my transcript master post and in the notes to the AO3 version; if you have need of a "latest version", check back there occasionally to see if there's anything new.
Anyway, same as the last time -- all the versions of my transcript are where I left them, but have been updated. If you access the transcript online, nothing changes. But if you download and save a copy on your own computer, or copy it to a word-processing program to manipulate to your satisfaction, you may want to go grab the latest version.
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