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Just what the title says. I've added approximately 4,700 more words of action-description, and about 1,300 more words of Copley’s-board descriptions. I also changed the formatting to put (most) descriptions on separate lines from dialogue. Changed some dialogue from what was in the provided transcript to what the characters actually said, and a couple of places where I originally attributed a line to the wrong character. Fixed some continuity mistakes, weaving the action-description within the dialogue.
Here at AO3
Or at Dreamwidth -- 11 versions of different color, bold, italics, or plain formatting.
I also made a floorplan of the Charlie safehouse, posted at AO3.